For some reason, "Smell" now totally makes sense to me, and I like it and where you placed it in the whole piece.

What you've done with "Touch", the addition at the end, the subtle tie to how Chris later deals with Toby, is incredible. I really love this section.

The last line is perfect. It sets up everything to come and ties it nicely in with the story about Vern's memories.

So... what's next? ;-)