Thanks sweetie. Your suggestions were, as usual, awesome. The changes to "Touch" occurred to me while I was driving to a job site. Forty-five minutes to think. Whoo hoo! It just clicked all of a sudden and then the whole thing didn't seem so unfinished.

So... what's next?

Um ... well, there's that McManus/Sr. Pete thing. Maybe I'll get it finished now. And there might be some Keller/Beecher, with a little sub-plot of Said/Adebisi. Dear lord, I'm going to hell, aren't I?